fix: improve intro and fix typo

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/src/generic/cover_letter.tex b/src/generic/cover_letter.tex
index 5059d71..020a791 100644
--- a/src/generic/cover_letter.tex
+++ b/src/generic/cover_letter.tex
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@
 
 \makelettertitle{}
 
-I am contacting you in regard to the Software Engineer position would love to discuss the
-opportunity.
+I am contacting you in regard to the Software Engineer position. I am excited by the work you are
+doing and would love to discuss the opportunity of being a part of it.
 
 As a generational engineer, I have been engaged in engineering the majority of my life, both as a
-hobby, as well as professionally. While I have tangible experience in both mechanical and electrical
-engineering, I have found software engineering to be an excellent conduit for my love of building
-systems. I have a passion and natural affinity for writing code and have high standards for quality,
-which often led to taking on a `lead-by-example' role in the teams I have worked in.
+hobby, as well as professionally. While I have tangible experience in both mechanical and
+electrical engineering, I have found software engineering to be an excellent conduit for my love of
+building systems. I have a passion and natural affinity for writing code and have high standards
+for quality, which often led to taking on a `lead-by-example' role in the teams I have worked in.
 
 I love to explore and learn about new things and a majority of my free time is spend doing so.
 Through my hobbies and career, I have developed a diverse skill set that includes knowledge of many