fix: improve generic cover letter

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/src/generic/cover_letter.tex b/src/generic/cover_letter.tex
index c97f26e..5059d71 100644
--- a/src/generic/cover_letter.tex
+++ b/src/generic/cover_letter.tex
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 \makelettertitle{}
 
 I am contacting you in regard to the Software Engineer position would love to discuss the
-opportunity to be a part of it.
+opportunity.
 
 As a generational engineer, I have been engaged in engineering the majority of my life, both as a
 hobby, as well as professionally. While I have tangible experience in both mechanical and electrical
@@ -20,11 +20,10 @@ systems. I have a passion and natural affinity for writing code and have high st
 which often led to taking on a `lead-by-example' role in the teams I have worked in.
 
 I love to explore and learn about new things and a majority of my free time is spend doing so.
-Through my hobbies and career, I have developed a diverse knowledge base and wide skill set,
-including a strong understanding of DevOps, containerization, and Unix systems, to name a few. I
-hope this, along with my proficiency for engineering and passion for writing efficient and correct
-code, could provide unique qualifications for this opportunity, and look forward to discussing it
-further.
+Through my hobbies and career, I have developed a diverse skill set that includes knowledge of many
+languages and a strong understanding of subdomains such as DevOps and Unix systems. I hope this,
+along with my passion and proficiency for engineering and writing efficient and correct code, could
+provide unique qualifications for this opportunity and look forward to discussing it further.
 
 \makeletterclosing{}